Add in subtitles to make it more understandable for the audience.

Shorten/ cut out points of the story that are not as important to shorten and include more of a conclusion.

Pace questions so viewers are able to read.

Add conclusion to sum up her main point about family being so important to her getting through the challenges that she faced.

Revise pictures that are in the beginning of the video.

Find music effective for pieces of story.

Create better transitions of questions asked.

Provide more background information on Liberian civil war at beginning of video.